DRAFT 4 (FINAL)
This is my final draft. I'm happy with the outcome but not sure if it matches with my front cover and contents page. After looking at audience feedback I have changed a few things. I changed the colour of 'exclusive' to red, as this makes it stand out more. I also changed the font and made it a little bigger. I moved 'rockstar' back up a little, changing the font and making it larger. I think this way it stands out more
This time I asked what they LIKED about my double page spread, and if they would buy my magazine.
DRAFT 3
Looking at my previous feedback, I created another draft. I moved the text 'ROCKSTAR!' down a little, I think this looks better but looking at it all together it still needs some improvement. I also noticed that on my front cover I'd written a quote that Lisa says, however I haven't written it in the interview, so I'm going to add it in.
Audience feedback from my teacher.
He told me that the text 'rockstar' and 'exclusive' needs to be bigger, maybe a different font to make it stand out. He also said I should add some anchorage onto the picture. He also said I needed to add credit to my interview, for example who took the photos? Who was the editor?
Audience feedback from students.
I asked 5 people something I should improve, this is what they said.
Maria: ''The fold line isn't straight in the middle.''
Ben:''The boarder on 'rockstar' and 'exclusive' isn't straight''.
Sophie:''You should change the colour of the introductory line so it stands out and doesn't blend in with the rest of the interview''
Ryan:''Make 'rockstar' bigger because it doesn't really stand out.''
Sarah:''The line to fold the magazine isn't in the middle''
DRAFT 2
Considering my previous audience feedback I created a second draft. I created two columns and moved the pull quote into the middle, and publisher wrapped the rest of the text around it. I also moved 'EXCLUSIVE' to the top right, this made it stand out to the audience more, I carried on using the colour scheme I had origionally planned for font colours as this makes my magazine look professional and fit together more. I'm still unsure about this as I think the word 'rockstar' should be bigger as it looks like it's just floating around. I'm going to take audience feedback and submit another draft.
Audience feedback from my teacher.
He said I'd cut some of the text off at the end of the interview - which I initially hadn't noticed. He also said I should move 'ROCKSTAR' down a little bit.
Audience feedback off students.
I asked students something I should improve on my double page spread. The majority also pointed out the fact I'd cut some of the interview off. A lot of students said 'ROCKSTAR!' looked awkwardly placed, asif it was just floating around. Two people also pointed out that the ITunes logo was too far away from the text 'debut album - 'back to the beginning' now on itunes'
DRAFT 1
Audience feedback off my teacher.
He said the page title fonts didn't go well as 'MUSICIAN' should look more rocky, as it's a indie/rock magazine. He also said the pull quote should be in the middle of the two columns. I also need to create the columns as I wrote in two seperate text boxes. I also need to add more writing as the interview was definately not long enough.
Audience feedback off students.
I asked 10 people what I should change about my double page spread.
1.''The columns aren't equal sizes''
2.''Exclusive should be bigger so it attracts the reader''
3.''The interview isn't long enough''
4.''The interview is really short and doesn't have much detail''
5.''Theres a lot of blank space on the page''
6.''You could move exclusive to the top right corner so make it stand out more''
7.''The drop cap is small''
8.''Theres not enough text in the interview''
9.''The brick wall should be moved to the left a bit so theres not as much white space''
10.''The pull quote should go inbetween the two columns''
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