This is my first draft which was just to see where everything would go. It definately needs a lot of improvement. I don't have many sell lines and the whole page looks too empty.
Audience feedback.
I asked a few people on their opinions of my magazine so I could improve, here's what they said.
Lauren: I like the image but the background is too empty and the bottom left corner should have an image.
Yasmin: I think the masthead should be bigger, and more sell lines need to be added. I like the image but the quality isn't that good.
Lisa: You need some sell lines and maybe a background? It looks too empty but I like the name and the image.
Ben: The colour scheme works well with your genre, but the front cover looks empty and plain.
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