Audience feedback.
I asked 10 people their opinions of my front cover, 1 thing they like and 1 thing i should improve.
1.''I like how the text stands out. You should change the sentence 'talks about bands new album' it doesn't make sence.''
2.''I like how the 'plus' stands out, it attracts the audience. I think you should make the picture clearer.'
3.''The 'plus' stands out'' i think you should make the sentence at the bottom a bit bolder.''
4.''I like how the colours all go together, it carries on throughout the front page. I think you should change 'Chris Harrison talks about bands new album' to' Chris Harrison talks about his new album''
5.''I like the image. I think you should move the reading festival sign to the left because it's covering her thumb.''
6. ''The magazine looks really conventional, i like it. However, 'Chris Harrison talks about bands new album' should be changed to 'chris harrison talks about HIS bands new album' or 'chris harrison talks about new album!''
7. ''I like the whole magazine as one, it looks like a real magazine'' ''The red colour on one of the apostrophes looks too bright compared to the others''
8.''The magazine looks conventional. The image is a little blurry'
9.I like the photo and the pose. The sentence at the bottom doesn't make sense'
10.The colour scheme works well, everything stands out. The sentence at the bottom doesn't make sence.''
My teacher said I should change the colour on the apostrophy as it doesn't match the other dark red colour. He also said about the sell line at the bottom which alot of people mentioned. I'm going to change it to 'Chris Harrison! Talks about new album''
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