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Thursday, 15 December 2011

FRONT COVER DRAFT 5 & AUDIENCE FEEDBACK!


Audience feedback.

I made up a questionaire to ask 10 people at my college as they fit the age range for my product.
1.Does the magazine appeal to you?
YES: 8
NO: 2
Why?: ''I don't listen to rock music'' and ''theres not enough writing to make me want to read it''
2.What genre do you think the magazine is?
INDIE/ROCK: 10
POP: 0 
HEAVY METAL: 0
3.Would you buy it?
YES: 8
 NO: 2
Why? (same reaons as why it doesn't appeal to them)
4.Does it look like it all fits together?
 YES: 9 NO: 1
Why?: ''The reading festival circle looks like it's floating around, should have a boarder to make it stand out, apart from that it looks like it goes together.''
5.Is the price too high?
YES: 0 MAKE IT HIGHER: 4 IT'S FINE: 6

I then individually asked each person 1 thing I should improve on.
1. ''Put a boarder around the reading festival circle.''
2. ''Make 'output' bigger''
3. ''Make the sell lines bigger, like a thicker font to stand out''
4. ''The red colour is brighter on the word 'issue' than the other colour reds, make sure they all match!''
5.''Theres too many fonts''
6.''Add a skyline, 'OUTPUT' looks too squashed up.''
7.''Add a bright colour to make it stand out''
8.''Some of the boxes around the text look wonky''
9.''Get rid of the page numbers''
10.''Make the masthead bigger''

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